First Revision: The International Rick Calloway wrote the first draft of "The Glass Tower" in six weeks during the summer of 1987, in a one-bedroom apartment on Fountain Avenue where the air conditioner wheezed and the cockroaches held committee meetings in the kitchen. He typed it on a Kaypro II that weighed roughly as much as a small filing cabinet, using WordStar 4.0, the blue screen glowing in the Hollywood dusk while Guns N' Roses screamed "Welcome to the Jungle" from the cassette deck. He was thirty-two years old, a Midwestern transplant who had arrived in LA five years earlier with a degree in journalism from the University of Michigan and a conviction, still largely intact, that movies could change the world. The script was about the savings and loan crisis that was then beginning to crack open beneath the surface of Reagan's America. Rick had spent three months researching it, driving his battered Datsun to failed S&Ls in Orange County and the Inland Empire, interviewing depositors who had lost their life savings, talking to regulators who spoke off the record about political pressure and cooked books. The protagonist, Jack Harmon, was a straight-arrow examiner for the Federal Home Loan Bank Board who discovers a vast fraud at a Texas thrift and fights to expose it against institutional resistance. It was All the President's Men meets Chinatown, and Rick believed in it the way only a young man who has not yet made a sale can believe in anything. His agent, a chain-smoking veteran named Arlene Fishman who worked out of a bungalow on Larchmont, sent the script to three studios. Two passed. The third, a mid-sized production company called Pacifica Pictures that operated out of a glass-and-stucco nightmare on Wilshire, called back. Arlene summoned Rick to her office and delivered the news with the weary authority of someone who had seen this movie before. "They love it," she said. "But there's a condition. The lead investor is a Japanese conglomerate, Mitsukawa Holdings. They're not comfortable with the protagonist going after an American institution. It makes them look like they're attacking their host country. They want the main character to be Japanese-American. A Nisei examiner fighting for justice. It's the same story, Rick. Same script. You just change the name and add two lines about the character's grandfather being in the 442nd." She lit a Merit. "It's not a big deal." Rick hesitated. In his mind, the character was a particular kind of American—the white, middle-class functionary who has always trusted the system and is forced to confront its corruption. Changing the ethnicity wasn't just cosmetic. It changed the meaning. But Arlene was already talking about the budget—eight million, which was real money for a mid-level drama in 1987—and the director they had in mind, a Japanese-American filmmaker named Ken Nakamura who had just won the Grand Jury Prize at Sundance. "This is your ticket," Arlene said. "Don't be an asshole about it." Rick looked at the poster on Arlene's wall, a framed one-sheet for "All the President's Men," and thought about the compromises that Woodward and Bernstein must have made along the way, the battles they had chosen and the ones they had let go. "Okay," he said. "Change the name." Second Revision: The Star The rewrite took four weeks. Rick changed Jack Harmon to Kenji Hayashi, added a brief flashback to the grandfather's internment at Manzanar, and adjusted the dialogue to reflect a slightly different cultural background. The script was stronger for it, he told himself. The internment angle added historical resonance. The 442nd detail gave the character a heroic lineage. These were improvements, not compromises. Pacifica loved the new draft. Ken Nakamura, the director, signed on. The budget was confirmed at eight-point-three million. The next step, Arlene explained, was attaching a star. Without a name, the film would never get a release date. The name they wanted was James Chandler, a forty-five-year-old actor who had built his career playing lawmen and soldiers and who was then coming off the biggest hit of his life, a buddy-cop comedy called "Partners in Crime" that had grossed a hundred and forty million domestic. Chandler was not Japanese-American. He was not even remotely Japanese-American. He was the son of a Wyoming rancher, with the sun-leathered face of someone who had never been indoors for more than an hour at a time. "Attach him, and we get a distributor in forty-eight hours," Arlene said. "Don't attach him, and the film dies in turnaround. Those are your options." "What about the character? The whole point is that he's Japanese-American now." "So he's not Japanese-American. He's back to being Jack Harmon. Nobody reads the script that carefully, Rick. They read the poster." Rick drove home that night with the windows down, the Santa Ana winds blowing hot and dry from the desert, U2's "I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For" on KROQ. He thought about the internment flashback he had written, the scene he had labored over for days, the dialogue he had crafted about what it meant to be an American who had been betrayed by America. Now it was all going in the trash. Not because the story demanded it. Because a movie star was the wrong ethnicity for the character that the previous compromise had created. But the film would get made. The story would reach millions of people. Wasn't that the point? Wasn't a compromised message better than a perfect silence? He called Arlene the next morning. "Do it," he said. Third Revision: The Studio With James Chandler attached, the film was picked up by Centurion Pictures, a major studio with an actual lot and a logo that roared. Rick had never been on a studio lot before. He walked onto the Centurion backlot on a Wednesday in October, past the New York street and the Western town and the fake suburban cul-de-sac where a hundred family sitcoms had been shot, and he felt, for the first time, like he had made it. The meeting was in a conference room on the third floor of the executive building, with a view of the Hollywood Hills and a table long enough to land a helicopter on. Present were three studio executives, all in suits that cost more than Rick's car, and a development executive named Barry Glickman, who had been assigned to shepherd the project through production. Barry was a short man with a mustache and the nervous energy of someone who had consumed his own body weight in cocaine during the previous decade and was now running on fumes and Diet Coke. "The script is great," Barry said. "Really great. Gripping. Important. The kind of picture we need more of." He paused. "There's just one thing. The character of the main antagonist, the S&L owner who committed the fraud. In the current draft, he's a wealthy Republican donor with connections to the White House." "That's what the research showed," Rick said. "That's who these guys were." "I understand. The research is impeccable. Here's the thing. Centurion has a parent company. The parent company has shareholders. Some of those shareholders are... let's say, politically adjacent to the kind of individual you're describing. They would take it as a personal attack. The studio can't survive a war with its own investors." "So what do you want?" "De-politicize him. Make him a generic sleazebag. A guy who's in it for the money, not the ideology. That way the picture is about greed, not politics. Greed is universal. Politics is divisive." Rick looked at Arlene, who was sitting beside him. She gave a tiny shrug, the gesture of someone who had been in this room a hundred times and knew the script by heart. "Greed is universal," Rick repeated. "Exactly. You get it. You really get it." That night, Rick sat in his apartment and stared at the script. The antagonist was no longer Charles Davenport Whitfield III, Texas oil heir turned thrift kingpin with a framed photo of himself shaking hands with Reagan. He was now Vincent Corallo, generic mob-adjacent operator with no politics and no ideology and no soul. He was a villain you could boo without thinking about why he existed. The script was still good, Rick told himself. It was still about institutional corruption. It just wasn't about this particular institution anymore. Fourth Revision: The Censors In January 1988, the MPAA ratings board delivered its verdict on the script. The scene where Jack Harmon confronts the corrupt regulator in the parking garage—the scene Rick considered the emotional center of the film, the scene where Jack says, "You were supposed to protect them, and you sold them out for campaign contributions"—had triggered a red flag. The word "campaign contributions" was a problem. So was the regulator's line, "You think this is about politics? This is about survival. The people who run this country don't answer to you or me or anyone." The board warned that scenes explicitly linking political donations to regulatory decisions could result in an R rating. The studio wanted a PG-13. An R rating would cut the potential audience by thirty percent. "We can't lose that scene," Rick said to Barry Glickman. "It's the whole point of the movie." "The point of the movie," Barry said, "is to be seen by as many people as possible. If the scene is the point, and the scene keeps the movie from being seen, then the scene is defeating the point. Do you see the logic?" Rick saw the logic. That was the thing about Barry Glickman: he was always logical. Every suggestion was framed as a rational optimization. Every compromise was presented as the only reasonable choice. He rewrote the parking garage scene. The word "campaign" became "the people upstairs." The regulator's monologue became a more generic lament about "the way things work." The scene was still powerful, still angry, still accusing. It just wasn't accusing anyone in particular anymore. Barry was delighted. "This is why you're the writer," he said. "You find the solution." Fifth Revision: The Love Interest In March, James Chandler's people called. The star had been thinking about the script, and he felt the character needed more dimension. Specifically, the character needed a love interest. A wife, maybe, or a girlfriend. Someone who represented what he was fighting for. Someone the audience could root for. Rick had deliberately written Jack Harmon as a solitary figure. The loneliness was part of the point: a man who had alienated everyone around him in his pursuit of the truth. Adding a love interest would dilute that loneliness, turn the story from a portrait of obsession into a romance with a corruption subplot. But James Chandler was the star. Without him, the film didn't exist. And James Chandler's Q-score among women aged eighteen to thirty-four was low, according to the studio's research. A love interest would help. "Think of it as structural reinforcement," Arlene said. "You're not losing the core story. You're building a support system around it." Rick wrote a wife for Jack Harmon. Her name was Laura. She was a journalist, so she understood his work. She loved him despite his obsession. She was patient and beautiful and entirely fictional, and every scene she appeared in pulled the film a little further from the solitary, driven narrative that had once been its reason for existing. The script was now one hundred and twenty-four pages. The original had been one hundred and two. Most of the new pages were Laura. Sixth Revision: The Focus Group The first test screening was held at a multiplex in Sherman Oaks on a Tuesday night in April. Rick sat in the back row, eating popcorn that tasted like cardboard, watching an audience of four hundred strangers watch his movie. The film was rough—no color correction yet, temp music, placeholder sound effects—but the story was there. Or what remained of it. The focus group afterward was conducted by a woman with a clipboard and the professionally neutral voice of someone who had moderated a thousand of these sessions. The feedback was, by industry standards, positive. The audience liked James Chandler. They liked Laura. They thought the villain was appropriately villainous. Several people used the word "entertaining." One comment, from a woman in her forties with a perm and oversized glasses, stuck in Rick's mind. "I don't understand why he cares so much," she said. "It's just a bank, right? I mean, it's not like anyone died." Rick wanted to explain that people had died, metaphorically and literally—that retirees had lost their pensions, that families had lost their homes, that the corruption of the S&L industry was going to cost American taxpayers hundreds of billions of dollars by the time it was over. But the focus group was not a classroom, and the woman with the perm was not a student, and the movie that could have explained it to her was not the movie on the screen. Barry Glickman called three days later with notes. The ending needed work. Audiences had found it depressing. Jack Harmon wins, sort of—the fraud is exposed, the villain arrested—but the system doesn't change. The final shot is Jack walking away from the courthouse, alone, while the camera pulls back to show the gleaming towers of downtown Houston, indifferent and eternal. It was an honest ending. It was an ending that said: the fight is never really over. "Give him a win," Barry said. "Not a total win. Just something. A moment where he goes home to Laura and she says she's proud of him. A moment where the audience can leave the theater feeling like justice was done." "But justice wasn't done. That's the point." "Rick." Barry's voice was patient, paternal. "I'm not arguing with your point. I'm telling you that the audience wants to believe justice was done, and if we don't give them that, they won't recommend the movie to their friends, and the movie will disappear, and then nobody hears your point at all. Is that what you want?" It was the logic of every compromise, repeated for the sixth time. Make the change or lose the movie. Make the movie softer or lose it entirely. Bend or break. Rick wrote a new ending. Jack goes home to Laura. She says she's proud of him. They embrace. The camera pulls back to show their house, a modest Craftsman in a quiet Pasadena neighborhood, and the lights of Los Angeles twinkling in the distance, and somewhere out there, injustice still existed, but Jack had done his part, and that was enough. Seventh Revision: The Premiere "The Glass Tower" premiered at the Cinerama Dome on Sunset Boulevard in the fall of 1988, two weeks before the presidential election that would send George H.W. Bush to the White House. Rick wore a tuxedo that he had rented from a place on La Cienega. Arlene wore a red dress. James Chandler arrived in a limousine with Laura, who was now played by a twenty-six-year-old actress named Courtney Marsh, whose previous credits included a Pepsi commercial and a guest spot on "Miami Vice." The reviews were kind. "A solid, well-crafted thriller," said the LA Times. "Chandler brings gravity to the role of a man fighting institutional inertia." The Hollywood Reporter called it "engrossing, if somewhat safe." No one used the word "corruption." No one mentioned the S&L crisis. The movie was a thriller now, not an exposé. It was about one man's integrity, not a system's failure. Rick sat in the dark, watching the screen, and tried to find his script in the movie that unspooled before him. There were traces of it. A line here, a shot there, the ghost of a scene that had once meant something. But the architecture was gone. The skeleton had been replaced, bone by bone, until the creature on the screen was something new, something that wore the name of his film but not its heart. Afterward, at the party at Spago, a woman from the studio's marketing department came up to him with a glass of champagne. "You must be so proud," she said. "It's such an important film." "Important how?" Rick asked. She looked at him, her smile flickering. "You know. About, like, honesty. And doing the right thing." He nodded. He smiled. He accepted the champagne. Later, standing alone on the restaurant's patio, looking down at the lights of Sunset Boulevard, he tried to trace the path he had taken from the first draft to the premiere. Each step had been reasonable. Each compromise had been justified. The Japanese investor, the star attachment, the depoliticized villain, the softened scene, the added love interest, the rewritten ending. Each decision, in its moment, had been the right decision, the only decision, the decision that kept the project alive. And yet, the sum of those right decisions was a movie that said nothing about anything. A movie that had started as an accusation and ended as a reassurance. A movie in which the system was never named, the guilty were never identified, and the audience left the theater feeling good about a world that had not changed. The seventh revision had been invisible. It had happened not in the script, but in the space between the script and Rick's own understanding of what he had done. The seventh revision was the moment he stopped noticing the compromises. The moment the heat of the water felt normal. The moment he became, without ever deciding to become, the kind of person who could make a movie about corruption and come away feeling proud. He thought about the woman from the focus group, the one with the perm, who had asked why anyone would care so much about a bank. She had been right, in her way. The movie she had seen was not about a bank. It was not about an S&L. It was not about anything at all. It was two hours of James Chandler looking concerned, and Courtney Marsh looking supportive, and the audience feeling like they had learned something when in fact they had only been entertained. The crooked path, Rick had always believed, was a path that eventually straightened. But what if some crooked paths only grew more crooked? What if each reasonable step, each justified compromise, each perfectly logical adjustment of principle, led not toward light but away from it, so gradually that you never saw the darkness until you were already inside it? He finished his champagne. He went back inside. Someone was proposing a toast to the director. Someone else was laughing about the weekend grosses. The party continued, as parties do, and Rick Calloway stood among the people who had made his movie, and smiled, and let himself be photographed, and told himself that the next one would be different. The next one would be different. That was the seventh revision. 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