The Mountain Clinic The clinic had two rooms. One was for waiting. One was for seeing patients. There was no receptionist. There was a X-ray machine from 1978 that jammed if you looked at it wrong. There was a refrigerator that held vaccines and occasionally held lunch if nobody remembered to take it out. There was a sink in the corner that dripped and nobody fixed because the plumber charged too much. Sam Hudson was twenty-six years old and he had been interning at this clinic for three months in the summer of 2008. He was from Harber, West Virginia, population 847, and his father had died of black lung when Sam was nineteen. His mother worked the night shift at Walmart and came home at seven in the morning and slept until four and then cooked breakfast and went back to work and slept until seven and the cycle repeated itself like a record with a scratch on it. Sam went to medical school on a scholarship. He came back to Harber because that's where the community clinic needed an intern and he owed something to the people who had kept him alive through school. He wasn't sure what that something was. Debt felt too small a word. Gratitude felt too large. Bill Carter was fifty-four and he had been working in the Carter Family Mine for thirty-six years. The mine was on the side of a mountain that had been mined so thoroughly that most of the mountain was now hollow, a network of tunnels held up by wooden beams that rotting from the inside out. Bill's job was to operate a continuous miner, a machine the size of a bus that chewed through coal and loaded it onto a conveyor belt. He did this eight hours a day, five days a week, for thirty-six years. His lungs were full of coal dust. Not a little full. Full full. Like someone had filled his chest with flour and then sealed the bag. He came to the clinic on a Tuesday in July. He sat in the waiting room—which was also the seeing room, because there was only one room for both—and told Sam he couldn't breathe. "Can you show me?" Sam said. Bill stood up. He took one step and his chest hitched, like a car engine that had lost a cylinder. He sat back down. "I can't—" He stopped. He tried again. "I can't walk to the mailbox without stopping." Sam listened to his lungs. The sounds were wrong. They sounded like someone crumpling cellophane inside a pillowcase. He ordered a chest X-ray. The machine jammed. He waited twenty minutes. He jiggled the handle. The machine worked. The X-ray showed bilateral pulmonary fibrosis, stage four. Bill's lungs were turning to stone. "Can you fix it?" Bill asked. "No," Sam said. "But I can make you more comfortable." He prescribed an inhaler. The clinic carried the cheapest brand, a generic that cost three dollars a box and did about three dollars worth of good. Bill took it and nodded and said thank you and left. Sam watched him go through the window. Bill walked slowly, stopping twice on the way to his truck. He got in the truck and drove away and Sam went back to his desk and opened the next chart. There was always another chart. A twenty-two-year-old woman with a skin infection that wouldn't heal because she couldn't afford the antibiotics. A fifty-nine-year-old man with hypertension that was uncontrolled because he skipped doses to make the pills last longer. A fourteen-year-old boy with asthma who used a space heater in his bedroom because the gas bill was too high and the cold made his breathing worse. Sam kept a list in his head. He didn't write it down because writing things down made them real and he wasn't ready for them to be real. The list included: Mrs. Peletier, 67, diabetes, feet ulcerating because she couldn't get to the specialist in Beckley. Tommy Grimes, 9, asthma, living in a house with black mold behind the drywall because his mother couldn't afford to fix it. Raymond Holt, 51, early-stage lung cancer, refusing treatment because "what's the point, I'm a miner and miners die." Sam wrote a referral for Mrs. Peletier. He wrote a prescription for Tommy's inhaler. He told Raymond to come back when he was ready. None of them came back. In August, Bill Carter came back. His breathing was worse. The inhaler wasn't helping. His fingers were cyanotic, blue at the tips, the way they got when his blood oxygen dropped below eighty percent. "Mine closed," Bill said. "They said the coal seam ran out. Thirty-six years and they just— closed it." "I'm sorry." "My pension was vested for two years. Two years, Doc. That's all I get. Two years of pension and a body that's falling apart." Sam checked Bill's oxygen saturation. Seventy-eight percent. Normal was ninety-five to one hundred. Bill was breathing, but he wasn't getting enough oxygen. His heart was working harder to compensate. Eventually, the heart would give out. That's how this ended. Not dramatically. Just slowly, like a battery running down. "There's a pulmonary rehabilitation program in Beckley," Sam said. "It won't reverse the damage, but it might— " "I can't drive to Beckley," Bill said. "Gas is three dollars a gallon. My truck gets twelve miles to the gallon. And even if I could get there, what would they do? They'd look at me, see a miner with dust in his lungs, and send me home." Sam didn't have an answer. He found the report in September. Or rather, he found it by accident, looking for something else. He was reading a state health department bulletin about environmental contamination in Appalachian coal fields and he found a paragraph on page fourteen that said: "Groundwater monitoring near abandoned mine sites in eastern West Virginia has detected elevated levels of heavy metals, including arsenic, mercury, and lead. Sources include historical industrial waste disposal and natural mineral deposits exposed by mining operations." Abandoned mine sites. Historical industrial waste disposal. Sam thought about the water supply in Harber. The town got its water from a well on the north side of town, drilled in 1952. The Carter family mine was on the north side. So was the Holt family farm. So was the Peletier property. He ran a water test. Not a formal one—the clinic didn't have the equipment. He bought a home test kit from a hardware store and tested the clinic's tap water himself. The results came back on a Thursday in October. Arsenic levels: 12 micrograms per liter. The EPA limit is 10. It was over the limit. Not dramatically over. But over. He tested Bill Carter's blood. Arsenic: elevated. Not acutely toxic. Chronically elevated. From years of drinking contaminated water. Sam put two and two together and got four and realized the four was sitting in a room two doors down, trying to breathe and failing. The mine hadn't just filled Bill's lungs with coal dust. The mine had also poisoned the water that Bill had been drinking for thirty-six years. The arsenic was damaging his kidneys. It was contributing to the lung damage. It was probably responsible for the skin lesions on Mrs. Peletier's feet. It was probably making Tommy Grimes's asthma worse. It was probably the reason Raymond Holt's cancer was progressing faster than expected. One mine. One water supply. One town full of people who were slowly being poisoned by the thing that had sustained them for a century. He wrote a report. Forty pages. Water test results. Blood test results. Literature review on chronic arsenic exposure and its effects on pulmonary function. A map showing the proximity of the abandoned mine to the town's water well. A list of twelve residents who showed signs of heavy metal toxicity. He sent it to the West Virginia Department of Health. He heard nothing back. He sent a copy to the EPA regional office in Atlanta. He heard nothing back. He sent a copy to a journalist at the Charleston Gazette. The journalist called him once, asked two questions, and said he'd be in touch. He was never in touch. In November, the Carter Family Mine was officially closed. The family received insurance payouts. Twenty-five thousand dollars each. Bill Carter used fifteen thousand to pay the clinic. The rest went to his daughter, who lived in Columbus and said she'd "take care of Mom and Dad." Nobody knew if she did. In December, Sam's internship ended. He packed his bag on a Monday morning, shook hands with Greg Miller, the only full-time doctor at the clinic, who said "good luck, kid" in a voice that contained no enthusiasm and no cynicism, just exhaustion. He drove to Atlanta and started a new position at a hospital in Decatur. The hospital had a real X-ray machine. It had a pharmacy. It had specialists on site. It was nothing like the clinic. His mother asked him if he would miss Harber. "I don't know," he said. That was the truth. He missed the people. He didn't miss the clinic. He didn't miss the X-ray machine that jammed. He didn't miss watching people breathe and knowing he couldn't help them. He didn't miss Bill Carter. But he thought about him. Every time he saw a patient with dyspnea, he thought about Bill Carter sitting in the waiting room, stopping twice on the way to his truck. The mountain clinic still had two rooms. One for waiting. One for seeing. There was still no receptionist. The sink still dripped. Sam Hudson practiced medicine in Decatur for thirty years. He became a pulmonologist. He specialized in occupational lung disease. He published papers. He attended conferences. He was good at his job. But sometimes, in the middle of a consult, when he was listening to a patient's lungs with a stethoscope and the sounds were wrong—like cellophane crumpling inside a pillowcase—he would stop. He would close his eyes. 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